2013년 1월 13일 일요일

Debate


As we said oil is really important. We need oil for transportations and more. Cars, ships, and airplanes are mostly moving by oil. We need oils to transport food, animals, and many more important things.  And by doing this America will earn a lot of money and their economic will rise. I agree that this will kill the animals and harm people’s shelters but America’s government has money to support animals and people who are living in Alaska.

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